I. Introductory
a. General statement : There are several kinds of roomin a house
b. Thesis statement : A house consist of rooms such as living room, dining room, kitchen, family room, bedroom, bathroom and garage.
II. Body
a. Thesis sentence : Living room is the place for guest who come to the home
- Supporting sentence : This room use to enjoyable and better than other rooms.
- Supporting sentence : There are many furniture in this room.
b. Thesis sentence : The second is dining room, the room that consider to eat together and next to kitchen
- Supporting sentence : Dining room is the room which is usually located next to the kitchen
- Supporting sentence : Kitchen is the place for cooking
- Supporting sentence : Many houses don’t have specific room foe eating such dining room.
c. Thesis sentence : There is also a family room as the part of a house.
- Supporting sentence : In the family room, a family gets in touch between family members.
- Supporting sentence : Here, there is a television or other electronic devices which have function in making family members become closer each other.
- Supporting sentence : Furthermore, this is the most relaxful room in a house.
d. Thesis sentence : The next room is bedroom, the place which family members take a rest
- Supporting sentence : Bedroom is the private room because each of family members has one as their room
- Supporting sentence : Although this is a private room, it depends on the family’s habbitually.
- Supporting sentence : For many families in Indonesia, bedroom is not that private because it is just a place for sleeping.
e. Thesis sentence : Beside of those rooms, there is the most private room which is called as bathroom.
- Supporting sentence : It is the most important room and all of buildings have it.
- Supporting sentence : Moreover, people can not live healthy if there is no bathroom in their house.
- Supporting sentence : Bathroom is the most private room because people have to put off their clothes when they want to take a bath.
f. Thesis sentence : Finally, we can find garage as the part of rooms in a house
- Supporting sentence : Garage is the place for saving and parking the vehicles.
- Supporting sentence : Unfortunately, many houses especially in the village don’t have garage and just put their vehicle in the yard or living room.
III. Conclusion
a. Thesis sentence : These are the rooms in a house that you have to know.
The Parts of A House
A house is a building where people spend their time when they are out of activities. A house must be an enjoyable and friendly building, because it is very important for people’s phsycological condition. There are several kinds of room in a house. A house consist of rooms such as living room, dining room, kitchen, family room, bedroom, bathroom and garage. Here, I’m going to expalain them one by one.
Living room is the place for guest who come to the home. This room use to enjoyable and better than other rooms. It is because a house is valued by the appearance of rooms which the guests able to see. Actually, living room is the room that guest use to see. There are many furniture in this room. The furniture are sofa or clutches, vas and its flowers, beautiful table, gucci, family photos, and some other things.
The second is dining room, the room that consider to eat together and next to kitchen. Dining room is the room which is usually located next to the kitchen. As we have known, kitchen is the place for cooking. Kitchen is always there in a house, it is different with the dining room. Many houses don’t have specific room for eating such dining room.
There is also a family room as the part of a house. In the family room, a family gets in touch between family members. Here, there is a television or other electronic devices which have function in making family members become closer each other. Furthermore, this is the most relaxful room in a house.
The next room is bedroom, the place which family members take a rest. Bedroom is the private room because each of family members has one as their room. Although this is a private room, it depends on the family’s habbitually. For many families in Indonesia, bedroom is not that private because it is just a place for sleeping.
Beside of those rooms, there is the most private room which is called as bathroom. It is the most important room and all of buildings have it. Moreover, people can not live healthy if there is no bathroom in their house. Bathroom is the most private room because people have to put off their clothes when they want to take a bath.
Finally, we can find garage as the part of rooms in a house. Garage is the place for saving and parking the vehicles. Unfortunately, many houses especially in the village don’t have garage and just put their vehicle in the yard or living room. It is because there is not reminded place which could be used as a garage. The place is limited. As the result, people use to put their vehicle in the yard or next to living room.
These are the rooms in a house that you have to know. This case is very simple but it is pretty important to be evaluated because house is the most important building for our life. Hopefully, this article will be useful for us in thinking about our future home.
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Comparison-Contrast Essay by NURROHMA FITRIANA 120912124
OUTLINE OF COMPARISON AND CONTRAST ESSAY
• Theme : Differences between living in the village and living in the big city
• Introduction : There are several similarities and differences between living in the village and living in the big city
• Comparison
Points of comparison between village and big city :
1. Economic source and sallary
Village : farmer, sailor, teacher, PNS, etc.
Big city : great entrepreneurs, lecture, proffesor, driver, pilot, etc.
2. Social Condition
Village : friendly, gentle, mainstream.
Big city : individualism, open minded with new style.
3. Environmental condition
Village :village environmental is more natural and clean than environmental condition in big city
Big city :big city environmental is more modern, luxurious, but in some particular places are dirty if we compare with the environmental condition in village
4. Goal of people
Village : villagers’ mindset are more simple than people who live in big city
Big city : the mindset of people who live in big city are more complicated and curious than people who live in village
• Transition : Many point of views that we can compare and figured out between living in the big city and living in the village. In other sides, there are several contraries between those two subjects.
• Contrast
Points of contrast between living in the village and in the big city :
1. Job or economic source
Village : most of people have sallary less than people who live in big city
Big city : most of people have sallary more than people who live in village
2. Society
Village :people who live in village more care each other than people who live in big city
Big city :people who live in big city more individualism than people who live in village
3. Environment condition
Village : natural
Big city : dominated by great buildings
• Conclusion
Differences Between Living In The Village And Living In The Big City
Regions that spread in countries around the world consist of village areas and city areas. Several people decide to live in the village, but several others decide to live in the town or even in the big city. There are several similarities and differences between living in the village and living in the big city. If we compare the living condition of both areas, we can divide the comparisons into some sides. The points of comparison between village and big city are about the economic source and sallary, social condition, the environmental condition, and the goal of people.
The first is about economic point of view. We can see a comparison between those two areas. In the village, most of people work as farmer, the owner of forest and poultry, teacher, PNS, etc. They work as sailor if the village is in the edge of sea. While in the big city, many people work as the great entrepreneurs who attend many tenders, lecture, proffesor, driver, pilot, etc.
One of other reasons is about the social condition. As we know, the typical of persons or people who live in village are similar. People who live in village are friendly, gentle, mainstream. In this case, what we call mainstream means ordinary and depend on old rule. As usual, they still pretend about old belief and behaviour. It is different when we compare it with the society condition in the big city. People who live in the big city is more individualism, and open minded with new style. It is because the trend setter always rise from big city.
Beside of those two sides, we can compare it from environmental condition point of view. Village environmental is more natural and clean than environmental condition in big city. While the big city environmental is more modern, luxurious, but in some particular places are dirty if we compare with the environmental condition in village. These conditions give advantages and disadvantages for people who decide to live there.
Another reason is about the goal of people. It is kind of people’s mindset and destination in life. We can analyze that in the village, villagers’ mindset are more simple than people who live in big city. Most of them think that as time as they are not hungry, they will be fine. While in the big city, the mindset of people who live in big city are more complicated and curious than people who live in village. They consider to become very antusias in getting sallary and glory.
Many point of views that we can compare and figured out between living in the big city and living in the village. In other sides, there are several contraries between those two subjects. They are about job or economic source, about the society, and also about the environmental condition.
When we are talking about job or economic source in the village and big city, we find that the condition between both areas are pretty contrast. In the village, we figure out that most of people have sallary less than people who live in big city. Moreover, in the big city, most of people have sallary more than people who live in village. If we compare with village, this reality is ordinary because there are many economic sources which pledge big sallary in the big city. Although this fact is true, there are still many people live in village because of some other reasons.
Beside of that, we can also figure out contrary fact in society. In the village, people who live in village more care each other than people who live in big city. It means that the relationship between people are good and tight. Consequently, neighbourhoods are strong because they always care with their society. It is different with the social condition in the big city. People who live in big city more individualism than people who live in village. They have their own business so they have less time in order to becare touch with their society.
Another difference is about the environment condition. As have written on the top of this essay, the environmental condition in the village is still natural. We can see that many buildings in the village are original and simple. It is pretty different with the environmental condition in the big city which are dominated by great buildings. Those great buildings are luxurious and glamorous, completely with modern architectur.
Those all about the comparison and contrast between living in the village and living in the big city. All of the aspect that we can compare and find the differences have already stated in this essay. Hopefully, by knowing these facts, we can decide our future wiser. As we know, the choice of region we want to stay and live is based on our self. This essay would be very useful for us.
• Theme : Differences between living in the village and living in the big city
• Introduction : There are several similarities and differences between living in the village and living in the big city
• Comparison
Points of comparison between village and big city :
1. Economic source and sallary
Village : farmer, sailor, teacher, PNS, etc.
Big city : great entrepreneurs, lecture, proffesor, driver, pilot, etc.
2. Social Condition
Village : friendly, gentle, mainstream.
Big city : individualism, open minded with new style.
3. Environmental condition
Village :village environmental is more natural and clean than environmental condition in big city
Big city :big city environmental is more modern, luxurious, but in some particular places are dirty if we compare with the environmental condition in village
4. Goal of people
Village : villagers’ mindset are more simple than people who live in big city
Big city : the mindset of people who live in big city are more complicated and curious than people who live in village
• Transition : Many point of views that we can compare and figured out between living in the big city and living in the village. In other sides, there are several contraries between those two subjects.
• Contrast
Points of contrast between living in the village and in the big city :
1. Job or economic source
Village : most of people have sallary less than people who live in big city
Big city : most of people have sallary more than people who live in village
2. Society
Village :people who live in village more care each other than people who live in big city
Big city :people who live in big city more individualism than people who live in village
3. Environment condition
Village : natural
Big city : dominated by great buildings
• Conclusion
Differences Between Living In The Village And Living In The Big City
Regions that spread in countries around the world consist of village areas and city areas. Several people decide to live in the village, but several others decide to live in the town or even in the big city. There are several similarities and differences between living in the village and living in the big city. If we compare the living condition of both areas, we can divide the comparisons into some sides. The points of comparison between village and big city are about the economic source and sallary, social condition, the environmental condition, and the goal of people.
The first is about economic point of view. We can see a comparison between those two areas. In the village, most of people work as farmer, the owner of forest and poultry, teacher, PNS, etc. They work as sailor if the village is in the edge of sea. While in the big city, many people work as the great entrepreneurs who attend many tenders, lecture, proffesor, driver, pilot, etc.
One of other reasons is about the social condition. As we know, the typical of persons or people who live in village are similar. People who live in village are friendly, gentle, mainstream. In this case, what we call mainstream means ordinary and depend on old rule. As usual, they still pretend about old belief and behaviour. It is different when we compare it with the society condition in the big city. People who live in the big city is more individualism, and open minded with new style. It is because the trend setter always rise from big city.
Beside of those two sides, we can compare it from environmental condition point of view. Village environmental is more natural and clean than environmental condition in big city. While the big city environmental is more modern, luxurious, but in some particular places are dirty if we compare with the environmental condition in village. These conditions give advantages and disadvantages for people who decide to live there.
Another reason is about the goal of people. It is kind of people’s mindset and destination in life. We can analyze that in the village, villagers’ mindset are more simple than people who live in big city. Most of them think that as time as they are not hungry, they will be fine. While in the big city, the mindset of people who live in big city are more complicated and curious than people who live in village. They consider to become very antusias in getting sallary and glory.
Many point of views that we can compare and figured out between living in the big city and living in the village. In other sides, there are several contraries between those two subjects. They are about job or economic source, about the society, and also about the environmental condition.
When we are talking about job or economic source in the village and big city, we find that the condition between both areas are pretty contrast. In the village, we figure out that most of people have sallary less than people who live in big city. Moreover, in the big city, most of people have sallary more than people who live in village. If we compare with village, this reality is ordinary because there are many economic sources which pledge big sallary in the big city. Although this fact is true, there are still many people live in village because of some other reasons.
Beside of that, we can also figure out contrary fact in society. In the village, people who live in village more care each other than people who live in big city. It means that the relationship between people are good and tight. Consequently, neighbourhoods are strong because they always care with their society. It is different with the social condition in the big city. People who live in big city more individualism than people who live in village. They have their own business so they have less time in order to becare touch with their society.
Another difference is about the environment condition. As have written on the top of this essay, the environmental condition in the village is still natural. We can see that many buildings in the village are original and simple. It is pretty different with the environmental condition in the big city which are dominated by great buildings. Those great buildings are luxurious and glamorous, completely with modern architectur.
Those all about the comparison and contrast between living in the village and living in the big city. All of the aspect that we can compare and find the differences have already stated in this essay. Hopefully, by knowing these facts, we can decide our future wiser. As we know, the choice of region we want to stay and live is based on our self. This essay would be very useful for us.
Cause-Effect Essay by NURROHMA FITRIANA 120912124
Cause-Effect Paragraph Outline
I. Intro
i. General Statement : Eating is the main activity which always be done by human.
ii. Thesis Statement : Consuming healthy meal will maintain our healthy, increase our energy, and also rise our productivity.
II. Body
Paragraph 2
Topic sentence : Human need to be health in order to make their body fit, because the healthy meal will maintain the process inside our body.
Supporting detail : Junk food and fast food, which are instanly made in restourants are the kind of bad meal because they will stimulate body to produce cancer cells.
Paragraph 3
Topic sentence : Consuming the healthy meal can rise our energy
Supporting detail : Because the meal that we eat is health, so it is very save for us. In 20-25 years old, we need for about 2600 up to 4000 calories each day.
Paragraph 4
Topic sentence : When we consume the healthy meal, our body could get enough energy so we will be more energic.
Supporting detail : It means that we can rise our productivity in doing our daily activities, such as study in the university, work in the office or partime, and also active in organization, etc.
iii. Conslusion
Consuming healthy meal will maintain our healthy, increase our energy, and also rise our productivity.
Consuming Healthy Meal
Eating is the main activity which always be done by human. It is included in the main life needed. In Abraham Maslow’s chart, eating is in the top position as biologycal case. As we knew, human can not stay alive if they have not energy to survive and doing their activities. It is why the meal is on the top position of human’s daily need. Actually, we should consume the healthy meal. Consuming healthy meal will maintain our healthy, increase our energy, and also rise our productivity.
Human need to be health in order to make their body fit, because the healthy meal will maintain the process inside our body. Healthy meal such as vegetables, nabaty protein, fruits, and many kinds meal which are from the natural source. Junk food and fast food, which are instanly made in restourants are the kind of bad meal because they will stimulate body to produce cancer cells. That is why the kind of junk food could give very dangerous effect in our body.
Consuming the healthy meal can rise our energy. Because the meal that we eat is health, so it is very save for us. In 20-25 years old, we need for about 2600 up to 4000 calories each day. So, we have to fulfill our energy everyday by consuming the healthy meal.
When we consume the healthy meal, our body could get enough energy so we will be more energic. It means that we can rise our productivity in doing our daily activities, such as study in the university, work in the office or partime, and also active in organization, etc. Because of these reasons, we have to consume the healthy meal in order rising our productivity.
I. Intro
i. General Statement : Eating is the main activity which always be done by human.
ii. Thesis Statement : Consuming healthy meal will maintain our healthy, increase our energy, and also rise our productivity.
II. Body
Paragraph 2
Topic sentence : Human need to be health in order to make their body fit, because the healthy meal will maintain the process inside our body.
Supporting detail : Junk food and fast food, which are instanly made in restourants are the kind of bad meal because they will stimulate body to produce cancer cells.
Paragraph 3
Topic sentence : Consuming the healthy meal can rise our energy
Supporting detail : Because the meal that we eat is health, so it is very save for us. In 20-25 years old, we need for about 2600 up to 4000 calories each day.
Paragraph 4
Topic sentence : When we consume the healthy meal, our body could get enough energy so we will be more energic.
Supporting detail : It means that we can rise our productivity in doing our daily activities, such as study in the university, work in the office or partime, and also active in organization, etc.
iii. Conslusion
Consuming healthy meal will maintain our healthy, increase our energy, and also rise our productivity.
Consuming Healthy Meal
Eating is the main activity which always be done by human. It is included in the main life needed. In Abraham Maslow’s chart, eating is in the top position as biologycal case. As we knew, human can not stay alive if they have not energy to survive and doing their activities. It is why the meal is on the top position of human’s daily need. Actually, we should consume the healthy meal. Consuming healthy meal will maintain our healthy, increase our energy, and also rise our productivity.
Human need to be health in order to make their body fit, because the healthy meal will maintain the process inside our body. Healthy meal such as vegetables, nabaty protein, fruits, and many kinds meal which are from the natural source. Junk food and fast food, which are instanly made in restourants are the kind of bad meal because they will stimulate body to produce cancer cells. That is why the kind of junk food could give very dangerous effect in our body.
Consuming the healthy meal can rise our energy. Because the meal that we eat is health, so it is very save for us. In 20-25 years old, we need for about 2600 up to 4000 calories each day. So, we have to fulfill our energy everyday by consuming the healthy meal.
When we consume the healthy meal, our body could get enough energy so we will be more energic. It means that we can rise our productivity in doing our daily activities, such as study in the university, work in the office or partime, and also active in organization, etc. Because of these reasons, we have to consume the healthy meal in order rising our productivity.
Comparison-Contrast Essay by ROZZY CONSTANTIA 120912100
OUTLINE
I. Introductory
General statement : There are several kinds of land transportation that we can use if we want to go to another city.
Thesis statement : They are not only have some differences but also we can compare both of those land transportations.
II. Body
A. Travel car and executive bus have some similarities.
1. Both of them are land transportations.
2. Travel car and executive bus have some similar facilities.
3. Travel car and executive bus have a driver to drive them.
III. Transitional
Those are three similarities of travel car and executive bus. Although they are quite same but they also have differences.
IV. Body
B. There are three differences of travel car and executive bus.
1. Travel car and executive bus require different fee.
2. Executive bus is faster than travel car.
3. The third difference is about the flexibility.
V. Concluding
In conclusion, travel car and executive bus are quite the same but they also have differences. If we want to take a transportation which is flexible so we can take executive bus but if we do not want to take effort we can have travel car. Both of those transportations have their own specialty and weakness.
TRAVEL CAR AND EXECUTIVE BUS
There are several kinds of land transportation that we can use if we want to go to another city. For example like travel car and executive bus. They are not only have some differences but also we can compare both of those land transportations. I will compare both of them first.
Travel car and executive bus have some similarities. First, as we know both of them are land transportations. Then travel car and executive bus have some similar facilities. Both of them have air conditioner and storage room in it, so the passenger will feel comfortable. However, they also require limited passenger to make it comforter and avoid chaos between passengers. Last but not least, travel car and executive bus have a driver to drive them.
Those are three similarities of travel car and executive bus. Although they are quite same but they also have differences.
There are three differences of travel car and executive bus. The first difference is travel car and executive bus require different fee. Travel car’s fee is more expensive than executive bus’s fee. Then about the speed, executive bus is faster than travel car. Why? Because of executive bus do not pick up the passenger. The passengers have to go to bus station first if they want to go somewhere by executive bus. In the other hand, the passengers of travel car do not have to go to other place. They just need to sit down at home and wait the travel car come to pick them up. That is why travel car’s fee is more expensive than bus’s.
The third difference is about the flexibility. In arrival and departure, executive bus is more flexible than travel car. Executive bus will depart anytime or let say per hour but travel car have its own schedule of departure. Moreover, if we want to use travel car we have to make reservation first to book the seat and tell the agent of travel car where our home is and where our destination is. We do not have to do such that thing if we take executive bus.
In conclusion, travel car and executive bus are quite the same but they also have differences. For example, executive bus and travel car have the same facilities but they have different flexibility aspect. If we want to take a transportation which is flexible so we can take executive bus but if we do not want to take effort we can have travel car. Both of those transportations have their own specialty and weakness. It depends on our need and condition if we want to choose both of them.
I. Introductory
General statement : There are several kinds of land transportation that we can use if we want to go to another city.
Thesis statement : They are not only have some differences but also we can compare both of those land transportations.
II. Body
A. Travel car and executive bus have some similarities.
1. Both of them are land transportations.
2. Travel car and executive bus have some similar facilities.
3. Travel car and executive bus have a driver to drive them.
III. Transitional
Those are three similarities of travel car and executive bus. Although they are quite same but they also have differences.
IV. Body
B. There are three differences of travel car and executive bus.
1. Travel car and executive bus require different fee.
2. Executive bus is faster than travel car.
3. The third difference is about the flexibility.
V. Concluding
In conclusion, travel car and executive bus are quite the same but they also have differences. If we want to take a transportation which is flexible so we can take executive bus but if we do not want to take effort we can have travel car. Both of those transportations have their own specialty and weakness.
TRAVEL CAR AND EXECUTIVE BUS
There are several kinds of land transportation that we can use if we want to go to another city. For example like travel car and executive bus. They are not only have some differences but also we can compare both of those land transportations. I will compare both of them first.
Travel car and executive bus have some similarities. First, as we know both of them are land transportations. Then travel car and executive bus have some similar facilities. Both of them have air conditioner and storage room in it, so the passenger will feel comfortable. However, they also require limited passenger to make it comforter and avoid chaos between passengers. Last but not least, travel car and executive bus have a driver to drive them.
Those are three similarities of travel car and executive bus. Although they are quite same but they also have differences.
There are three differences of travel car and executive bus. The first difference is travel car and executive bus require different fee. Travel car’s fee is more expensive than executive bus’s fee. Then about the speed, executive bus is faster than travel car. Why? Because of executive bus do not pick up the passenger. The passengers have to go to bus station first if they want to go somewhere by executive bus. In the other hand, the passengers of travel car do not have to go to other place. They just need to sit down at home and wait the travel car come to pick them up. That is why travel car’s fee is more expensive than bus’s.
The third difference is about the flexibility. In arrival and departure, executive bus is more flexible than travel car. Executive bus will depart anytime or let say per hour but travel car have its own schedule of departure. Moreover, if we want to use travel car we have to make reservation first to book the seat and tell the agent of travel car where our home is and where our destination is. We do not have to do such that thing if we take executive bus.
In conclusion, travel car and executive bus are quite the same but they also have differences. For example, executive bus and travel car have the same facilities but they have different flexibility aspect. If we want to take a transportation which is flexible so we can take executive bus but if we do not want to take effort we can have travel car. Both of those transportations have their own specialty and weakness. It depends on our need and condition if we want to choose both of them.
Cause-Effect Essay by ROZZY CONSTANTIA 120912100
ROZZY CONSTANTIA 120912100
Outline of Causes of Juvenile Delinquency
I. Introduction.
- General statement : If we want to against juvenile delinquency, first of all we have to know the causes.
- Thesis statement : In my opinion if we take example from environmental aspects, generally we can divide it into three causes of juvenile delinquency.
II. Body.
a. First, the cause is from social learning.
1. Television and other media show violence, aggressive, and rude things.
2. The juvenile who watch, read, or listen it sometimes can’t recognize whether those things are good or not for them so they imitate those action without thinking first.
3. The examples are wrestling championship show, violence game online, and many things else.
b. Second is from peer group.
1. Each of peer group is different from other.
2. It will be better if they have good peer group but it will be worst if they have bad peer group.
3. Juvenile spend their time most with their peer group, so if their peer group have bad effect it is not possible if they follow the bad behavioral of it.
c. The third and also the last is the way the parents grow up their children and family condition.
1. If the parents don’t give enough attention to their children, the children will look for another attention outside home.
2. It is okay if they look for another attention in good way but if it is not it will be dangerous.
3. They will do such a bad and crime things then go into juvenile delinquency.
III. Concluding.
So we should make a good and conducive environment for juvenile to grow up so they will not turn into juvenile delinquency.
THE CAUSES OF JUVENILE DELINQUENCY
Nowadays there are many criminal cases done by juvenile. This is really horrible because of juvenile is the young generation who should be better than before. If we want to against juvenile delinquency, first of all we have to know the causes. There are many causes that lead to juvenile delinquency. In my opinion if we take example from environmental aspects, generally we can divide it into three causes of juvenile delinquency.
First, the cause is from social learning. Television and other media sometimes show violence, aggressive, and rude things. The juvenile who watch, read, or listen it sometimes can’t recognize whether those things are good or not for them so they imitate those action without thinking first. The examples of media which lead the juvenile into criminal things are wrestling championship show, violence game online, and many things else.
Second is from peer group. Juvenile actually have their own peer group. Each of peer group is different from other. It will be better if they have good peer group but it will be worst if they have bad peer group. Juvenile spend their time most with their peer group, so if their peer group have bad effect it is not possible if they follow the bad behavioral of it.
The third and also the last is the way the parents grow up their children and family condition. If the parents don’t give enough attention to their children, the children will look for another attention outside home. It is okay if they look for another attention in good way but if it is not it will be dangerous. They will do such a bad and crime things then go into juvenile delinquency.
In conclusion, juvenile delinquency is happened because of many factors. If we want to against it, we have to know the cause first. In general, from environmental aspects, there are three causes of juvenile delinquency such as social learning, peer group, and the way parents grow their children up and family condition. So we should make a good and conducive environment for juvenile to grow up so they will not turn into juvenile delinquency.
Outline of Causes of Juvenile Delinquency
I. Introduction.
- General statement : If we want to against juvenile delinquency, first of all we have to know the causes.
- Thesis statement : In my opinion if we take example from environmental aspects, generally we can divide it into three causes of juvenile delinquency.
II. Body.
a. First, the cause is from social learning.
1. Television and other media show violence, aggressive, and rude things.
2. The juvenile who watch, read, or listen it sometimes can’t recognize whether those things are good or not for them so they imitate those action without thinking first.
3. The examples are wrestling championship show, violence game online, and many things else.
b. Second is from peer group.
1. Each of peer group is different from other.
2. It will be better if they have good peer group but it will be worst if they have bad peer group.
3. Juvenile spend their time most with their peer group, so if their peer group have bad effect it is not possible if they follow the bad behavioral of it.
c. The third and also the last is the way the parents grow up their children and family condition.
1. If the parents don’t give enough attention to their children, the children will look for another attention outside home.
2. It is okay if they look for another attention in good way but if it is not it will be dangerous.
3. They will do such a bad and crime things then go into juvenile delinquency.
III. Concluding.
So we should make a good and conducive environment for juvenile to grow up so they will not turn into juvenile delinquency.
THE CAUSES OF JUVENILE DELINQUENCY
Nowadays there are many criminal cases done by juvenile. This is really horrible because of juvenile is the young generation who should be better than before. If we want to against juvenile delinquency, first of all we have to know the causes. There are many causes that lead to juvenile delinquency. In my opinion if we take example from environmental aspects, generally we can divide it into three causes of juvenile delinquency.
First, the cause is from social learning. Television and other media sometimes show violence, aggressive, and rude things. The juvenile who watch, read, or listen it sometimes can’t recognize whether those things are good or not for them so they imitate those action without thinking first. The examples of media which lead the juvenile into criminal things are wrestling championship show, violence game online, and many things else.
Second is from peer group. Juvenile actually have their own peer group. Each of peer group is different from other. It will be better if they have good peer group but it will be worst if they have bad peer group. Juvenile spend their time most with their peer group, so if their peer group have bad effect it is not possible if they follow the bad behavioral of it.
The third and also the last is the way the parents grow up their children and family condition. If the parents don’t give enough attention to their children, the children will look for another attention outside home. It is okay if they look for another attention in good way but if it is not it will be dangerous. They will do such a bad and crime things then go into juvenile delinquency.
In conclusion, juvenile delinquency is happened because of many factors. If we want to against it, we have to know the cause first. In general, from environmental aspects, there are three causes of juvenile delinquency such as social learning, peer group, and the way parents grow their children up and family condition. So we should make a good and conducive environment for juvenile to grow up so they will not turn into juvenile delinquency.
CLASSIFICATION ESSAY by ROZZY CONSTANTIA 120912100
OUTLINE of GASOLINE
I. Introduction.
General statement : Everybody in the world needs gasoline for living.
Thesis statement : Gasoline means petroleum derived liquid mixture which is used as fuel for our motor-vehicle and it has several kinds of it.
II. Body.
a. The first is premium.
1. It is good enough but it has the lowest quality of all.
2. Premium has yellow colour and its “oktan” number is 82.
3. It is used for motor-vehicle which has compression around 7:1 – 9:1.
4. It is especially used for motor-vehicle which has late years of production.
5. This price is cheapest of all.
6. It is sold around four thousand five hundred rupiahs per liter.
b. The following one is pertamax.
1. It has better quality than premium.
2. It has blue colour and its “oktan” number is 92.
3. It is used for vehicle which has compression around 9:1 – 10:1.
4. It is more efficient than premium.
5. It has stronger scent than premium.
6. This price is more expensive than premium.
7. It is sold around 7250 rupiahs per liter.
c. The last is Pertamax plus.
1. It has the best quality of all.
2. The colour is red and its “oktan” number is 95.
3. It is used for motor-vehicle which has compression around 10:1 – 11:1.
4. The high-end motor-vehicles have to use it.
5. The price is most expensive of all.
6. It is sold around 9000 rupiahs per liter.
III. Concluding.
Re-statement : The three kinds of gasoline above are important for our life.
Suggestion : We will get the efficient, effective, and optimal perform if we choose the most suitable gasoline for our vehicles depend on our vehicle compatibility.
GASOLINE
Everybody in the world needs gasoline for living. Gasoline means petroleum derived liquid mixture which is used as fuel for our motor-vehicle and it has several kinds of it. Pertamina, the oil company in Indonesia has three kinds of gasoline in general. They are premium, pertamax, and pertamax plus. Each of the gasoline has their own specialty and quality. Pertamina also sells premium, pertamax, and pertamax plus in different price range.
The first is premium. Actually it is good enough but it has the lowest quality of all. Premium has yellow colour and its “oktan” number is 82. This kind of gasoline is used for motor-vehicle which has compression around 7:1 – 9:1. Moreover, premium is especially used for motor-vehicle which has late years of production. This gasoline price also the cheapest of all. In Indonesia it is sold around four thousand five hundred rupiahs per liter.
The following one is pertamax. Pertamax has better quality than premium. It has blue colour and its “oktan” number is 92. Pertamax is used for vehicle which has compression around 9:1 – 10:1. Pertamax is more efficient than premium. It also has stronger scent than premium. The price is also more expensive than premium but cheaper than pertamax plus. Pertamina sells this gasoline product around 7250 rupiahs per liter.
The last is Pertamax plus. This kind of gasoline has the best quality of all. The colour of pertamax plus is red and its “oktan” number is 95. It is used for motor-vehicle which has compression around 10:1 – 11:1. The high-end motor-vehicles have to use pertamax plus. This gasoline also has the most expensive price of all. Because of its quality, Pertamina sells it in price range around 9000 rupiahs per liter.
The three kinds of gasoline above are important for our life. We need them as a fuel for our vehicles so we can go to other places for working, studying, holiday, and so many else. Although premium, pertamax, and pertamax plus have their own specification but all of them are important. We will get the efficient, effective, and optimal perform if we choose the most suitable gasoline for our vehicles depend on our vehicle compatibility.
I. Introduction.
General statement : Everybody in the world needs gasoline for living.
Thesis statement : Gasoline means petroleum derived liquid mixture which is used as fuel for our motor-vehicle and it has several kinds of it.
II. Body.
a. The first is premium.
1. It is good enough but it has the lowest quality of all.
2. Premium has yellow colour and its “oktan” number is 82.
3. It is used for motor-vehicle which has compression around 7:1 – 9:1.
4. It is especially used for motor-vehicle which has late years of production.
5. This price is cheapest of all.
6. It is sold around four thousand five hundred rupiahs per liter.
b. The following one is pertamax.
1. It has better quality than premium.
2. It has blue colour and its “oktan” number is 92.
3. It is used for vehicle which has compression around 9:1 – 10:1.
4. It is more efficient than premium.
5. It has stronger scent than premium.
6. This price is more expensive than premium.
7. It is sold around 7250 rupiahs per liter.
c. The last is Pertamax plus.
1. It has the best quality of all.
2. The colour is red and its “oktan” number is 95.
3. It is used for motor-vehicle which has compression around 10:1 – 11:1.
4. The high-end motor-vehicles have to use it.
5. The price is most expensive of all.
6. It is sold around 9000 rupiahs per liter.
III. Concluding.
Re-statement : The three kinds of gasoline above are important for our life.
Suggestion : We will get the efficient, effective, and optimal perform if we choose the most suitable gasoline for our vehicles depend on our vehicle compatibility.
GASOLINE
Everybody in the world needs gasoline for living. Gasoline means petroleum derived liquid mixture which is used as fuel for our motor-vehicle and it has several kinds of it. Pertamina, the oil company in Indonesia has three kinds of gasoline in general. They are premium, pertamax, and pertamax plus. Each of the gasoline has their own specialty and quality. Pertamina also sells premium, pertamax, and pertamax plus in different price range.
The first is premium. Actually it is good enough but it has the lowest quality of all. Premium has yellow colour and its “oktan” number is 82. This kind of gasoline is used for motor-vehicle which has compression around 7:1 – 9:1. Moreover, premium is especially used for motor-vehicle which has late years of production. This gasoline price also the cheapest of all. In Indonesia it is sold around four thousand five hundred rupiahs per liter.
The following one is pertamax. Pertamax has better quality than premium. It has blue colour and its “oktan” number is 92. Pertamax is used for vehicle which has compression around 9:1 – 10:1. Pertamax is more efficient than premium. It also has stronger scent than premium. The price is also more expensive than premium but cheaper than pertamax plus. Pertamina sells this gasoline product around 7250 rupiahs per liter.
The last is Pertamax plus. This kind of gasoline has the best quality of all. The colour of pertamax plus is red and its “oktan” number is 95. It is used for motor-vehicle which has compression around 10:1 – 11:1. The high-end motor-vehicles have to use pertamax plus. This gasoline also has the most expensive price of all. Because of its quality, Pertamina sells it in price range around 9000 rupiahs per liter.
The three kinds of gasoline above are important for our life. We need them as a fuel for our vehicles so we can go to other places for working, studying, holiday, and so many else. Although premium, pertamax, and pertamax plus have their own specification but all of them are important. We will get the efficient, effective, and optimal perform if we choose the most suitable gasoline for our vehicles depend on our vehicle compatibility.
Comparison-Contrast Essay by MIKE KRIPCILIA MILANIA 120912084
Outline
Tittle : Drink Coffee
I. Introductory
A. General statement : there are so many people that really like to drink coffee
B. Thesis statement there are some similarities and differences between ordinary curb cafe
II. Body
A. Comparison
Thesis sentence :
a. Ordinary curbside coffee shop and Coffee Corner coffee shop
- The main menu : offering a cup of hot coffee for the main menu.
- The same customer : the clients, most of them are male.
- The necessary : share with friends
B. Transition
- In addition, an ordinary curbside coffee shop has many differences with Coffee Corner coffee shop.
C. Contrast
a. Ordinary curbside coffee shop
- Price : cheaper.
- The place : very ordinary in the curbside
- The variant of coffee : less of variant coffee
- The customer : most of them are the frugal person
b. Coffee Corner coffee shop
- Price : more expensive
- The place : in the mall and other crowded places
- The variant of coffee : there are a lot of variants of coffee.
- The customer : most of them are businessman and someone who easy to spend much money.
III. Conclusion
Everyone has their own pleasure to enjoy their coffee. So, let them choose.
Drink Coffee
There are so many people that really like to drink coffee. Indeed, some people already addicted on it. Everyone has their own pleasure to drink it. Just like, there are some people that feel more enjoy to get coffee in the ordinary curbside coffee shop or in the cozy place like Coffee Corner an extraordinary coffee shop. Both of them has some similarities and differences.
This paragraph will tell about some similarities of ordinary curbside coffee shop and Coffee Corner coffee shop. They have the same main menu, coffee. Moreover, most of their customer are male. They usually smoking to make more enjoy drink coffee. The customer of coffee shop most of them are male and most of them go there to share with their friends or just spend their leissure time.
That is some similraities of them. In addition, ordinary curbside coffee shop and Coffee Corner coffee shop also have many differences.
Drink a cup of coffee in the ordinary curbside coffee shop is cheap here, we don’t need spend much money. But, it located in a very ordinary place in the curbside with the limited things. That’s why it has limited variant of coffee. Usually they serve the real coffee and milk coffee. Most of the customer are frugal people.
Different from Ordinary curbside coffee shop, Coffee Corner has expensive cost for a cup of coffee. It is caused by the coffee has high quality, the additional ingredients like cream and milk are the best quality too. Coffee corner serves the best product for their customer. That’s why we need spend much more money here. On the other hand, Coffee Corner coffee shop offering so many variant of coffee. From just a cup of real coffee to an extraordinary cappuccino. Moreover most of the customer are businessman who plan meeting there and someone who has much money to spend out.
Everyone has their own pleasure to enjoy drink coffee. Some people more enjoy to drink in the curbside and some others feel better to drink in the luxury coffee shop. But, the most important thing is they feel so enjoy and comfort in the anything situation. So, let them choose.
Tittle : Drink Coffee
I. Introductory
A. General statement : there are so many people that really like to drink coffee
B. Thesis statement there are some similarities and differences between ordinary curb cafe
II. Body
A. Comparison
Thesis sentence :
a. Ordinary curbside coffee shop and Coffee Corner coffee shop
- The main menu : offering a cup of hot coffee for the main menu.
- The same customer : the clients, most of them are male.
- The necessary : share with friends
B. Transition
- In addition, an ordinary curbside coffee shop has many differences with Coffee Corner coffee shop.
C. Contrast
a. Ordinary curbside coffee shop
- Price : cheaper.
- The place : very ordinary in the curbside
- The variant of coffee : less of variant coffee
- The customer : most of them are the frugal person
b. Coffee Corner coffee shop
- Price : more expensive
- The place : in the mall and other crowded places
- The variant of coffee : there are a lot of variants of coffee.
- The customer : most of them are businessman and someone who easy to spend much money.
III. Conclusion
Everyone has their own pleasure to enjoy their coffee. So, let them choose.
Drink Coffee
There are so many people that really like to drink coffee. Indeed, some people already addicted on it. Everyone has their own pleasure to drink it. Just like, there are some people that feel more enjoy to get coffee in the ordinary curbside coffee shop or in the cozy place like Coffee Corner an extraordinary coffee shop. Both of them has some similarities and differences.
This paragraph will tell about some similarities of ordinary curbside coffee shop and Coffee Corner coffee shop. They have the same main menu, coffee. Moreover, most of their customer are male. They usually smoking to make more enjoy drink coffee. The customer of coffee shop most of them are male and most of them go there to share with their friends or just spend their leissure time.
That is some similraities of them. In addition, ordinary curbside coffee shop and Coffee Corner coffee shop also have many differences.
Drink a cup of coffee in the ordinary curbside coffee shop is cheap here, we don’t need spend much money. But, it located in a very ordinary place in the curbside with the limited things. That’s why it has limited variant of coffee. Usually they serve the real coffee and milk coffee. Most of the customer are frugal people.
Different from Ordinary curbside coffee shop, Coffee Corner has expensive cost for a cup of coffee. It is caused by the coffee has high quality, the additional ingredients like cream and milk are the best quality too. Coffee corner serves the best product for their customer. That’s why we need spend much more money here. On the other hand, Coffee Corner coffee shop offering so many variant of coffee. From just a cup of real coffee to an extraordinary cappuccino. Moreover most of the customer are businessman who plan meeting there and someone who has much money to spend out.
Everyone has their own pleasure to enjoy drink coffee. Some people more enjoy to drink in the curbside and some others feel better to drink in the luxury coffee shop. But, the most important thing is they feel so enjoy and comfort in the anything situation. So, let them choose.
Cause-Effect Essay by MIKE KRIPCILIA MILANIA 120912084
Cause-Effect Essay
I. Introductory
- General statement : Bad effect of smoking
- Thesis statement : Smoking can cause bad effects for the smoker, the passive smoker and the environtment.
II. Body
a. Thesis sentence : Active smoker will get bad effect another day.
- Supporting : Smoking is already become their habit, so it make them so often to insert many kind of toxic that contained on the cigarette into their body.
b. Thesis sentence : Passive smoker is more risky to get the bad effects.
- Supporting : Someone around the smoking person inhale the smoke that contain various toxic can get the health problems.
- Supporting : The dangerous toxic spread from the smoke.
c. Thesis sentence : Environment also polluted by the smoke and cigarette.
- Supporting : The smoke which contains various toxic from cigarette can polluting trees.
- Supporting : The butt of cigarette also polluting ground and water.
III. Conclusion
- Stop smoking and live healthy, for the passive one just stay away from the smoke.
Smoking Effect
Smoking is one of addicted activities that have so many bad effects for our body. It also can called bad habit for the smoker. Beside for the smoker, the passive one, and the environment can get the effect, too. So, we have to pay more attention on it.
Someone who really like smoking or the active smoker will get bad result in another day. Smoking is already become their habit, it makes them so often to insert the toxic that contained on the cigarette into their body. Furthermore, it causes some diseases that will spread on their body, like lung cancer. This is one of the worst effect that could be happen. Beside that, this bad habit could be so bad for the pregnant women who smoke, they can get miscarriage. Other health problems are impotence and oral cancer. This is so dangerous.
The passive smoker, someone who doesn’t smoke but inhale the smoke from the active smoker around them will get the health problem, too. They can get lung cancer, breast cancer, brain tumor for the kids, and others. The passive smoker also more risky to get disease than the active one because the smoke of the cigarette more containing addictive subtances and toxics.
Other effect is bad environment, smoke make some pollutions. Just the same with the human’s lung, tree is the lung of the world. If the human’s lung can get cancer which caused by smoke of the cigarette, tree also can get problems with the same caused. Because tree perform basically the same function as our lungs. The pollution also affects the land we live on and the water that we drink. The cigarette butts can contaminate them.
These are the effect of smoking. So, if you want to save others and yourself just stop smoking. This the best decision for the smoker beside become life healthier they also save the environment and our world. It is not too late to realize.
I. Introductory
- General statement : Bad effect of smoking
- Thesis statement : Smoking can cause bad effects for the smoker, the passive smoker and the environtment.
II. Body
a. Thesis sentence : Active smoker will get bad effect another day.
- Supporting : Smoking is already become their habit, so it make them so often to insert many kind of toxic that contained on the cigarette into their body.
b. Thesis sentence : Passive smoker is more risky to get the bad effects.
- Supporting : Someone around the smoking person inhale the smoke that contain various toxic can get the health problems.
- Supporting : The dangerous toxic spread from the smoke.
c. Thesis sentence : Environment also polluted by the smoke and cigarette.
- Supporting : The smoke which contains various toxic from cigarette can polluting trees.
- Supporting : The butt of cigarette also polluting ground and water.
III. Conclusion
- Stop smoking and live healthy, for the passive one just stay away from the smoke.
Smoking Effect
Smoking is one of addicted activities that have so many bad effects for our body. It also can called bad habit for the smoker. Beside for the smoker, the passive one, and the environment can get the effect, too. So, we have to pay more attention on it.
Someone who really like smoking or the active smoker will get bad result in another day. Smoking is already become their habit, it makes them so often to insert the toxic that contained on the cigarette into their body. Furthermore, it causes some diseases that will spread on their body, like lung cancer. This is one of the worst effect that could be happen. Beside that, this bad habit could be so bad for the pregnant women who smoke, they can get miscarriage. Other health problems are impotence and oral cancer. This is so dangerous.
The passive smoker, someone who doesn’t smoke but inhale the smoke from the active smoker around them will get the health problem, too. They can get lung cancer, breast cancer, brain tumor for the kids, and others. The passive smoker also more risky to get disease than the active one because the smoke of the cigarette more containing addictive subtances and toxics.
Other effect is bad environment, smoke make some pollutions. Just the same with the human’s lung, tree is the lung of the world. If the human’s lung can get cancer which caused by smoke of the cigarette, tree also can get problems with the same caused. Because tree perform basically the same function as our lungs. The pollution also affects the land we live on and the water that we drink. The cigarette butts can contaminate them.
These are the effect of smoking. So, if you want to save others and yourself just stop smoking. This the best decision for the smoker beside become life healthier they also save the environment and our world. It is not too late to realize.
Classification Passage by MIKE KRIPCILIA MILANIA 120912084
I. Introductory
a. General statement : Film-making crew .
b. Thesis statement : There are many crew that is needed in making film.
II. Body
a. Thesis sentence : The chairman that so important is the producer.
- Supporting sentence : This person is fully responsible on the film-making.
- Supporting sentence : Producer finance the film-making.
- Supporting sentence : Producer pay a salary for the other crew .
b. Thesis sentence : The second is director, the leader of film-making process
- Supporting sentence : Become a director is not easy, it needs big responsible for their job to make the film become successful in the market.
- Supporting sentence : Direct the actors .
- Supporting sentence : Help to form character of the actors and also direct the setting of the film to make the film so catchy.
c. Thesis sentence : Other crew is the actors, mostly they are who have exceptional talent on acting and adoreable person who has interesting appearance.
- Supporting sentence : Actors must be good at expressing themselves in their role and explore the character.
- Supporting sentence : In addition, must be good at understanding the desire and direction of the director.
- Supporting sentence : Furthermore, mostly the actors have a good appearance.
d. Thesis sentence : The scriptwriter is the person who work behind the scenes writing the script and dialog for the actors.
- Supporting sentence : The writer needs to work hard and brainstorm to write the dialog and interesting way of the story.
- Supporting sentence : Although working behind the scenes, it is not easy become a writer, they must be good in selecting the right word to make a good sentence.
e. Thesis sentence : Camera crew also need to working hard here and they must be someone who good at take the angle.
- Supporting sentence : This part, need so strong teamwork to make the film is easy to watch.
- Supporting sentence : Moreover, they must be good at editing and give some effect on the screen that make eye-catching.
f. Thesis sentence : Additional crew that also needed is makeup staff
- Supporting sentence : Although makeup staff is just an additional crew, it is important to have.
- Supporting sentence : Makeup staff help to make the actors better looking on the screen or what the director want the actor looks like.
III. Conclusion
a. Thesis sentence : These are the crew on film making that you have to know.
Crew on Film
There are some people that can be categorized in film-making crew, they are producer, director, actors, writer, camera crew, and makeup staff. They should be exist on the film-making. From the leader until the person who works behind the scenes are very important. So, we really need to figure it out if we want to make a film.
The first is the chairman of the film, a producer. Producer is fully responsible in film-making if oneday there is problem. This is the person that finance film-making. On the order hand, this person also pay a salary for the crew. Producer is a powerful person here that can make decision the film should be produce or not.
The second important person is the director, the leader of the film-making process. Become a director is not easy, it needs a big responsible for their job to make the film become successful in the market. They must so good on predicting something the best for the film. Director is also must good at directing the actors to express their role. Furthermore, help to form character of the actors and decide the setting of the film to make the film so catchy are their work, too. It is need work hard you know.
Other crew is the actors, mostly they are who have exceptional talent on acting and adoreable person who has interesting appearance. Infact, most of the actors are famous person who good looking and have so many fans. It is the addtional mark to make the film success on the market. Moreover, the actors must be good at expressing themselves in their role and exploring the character. In addition, must be good at understanding the desire and direction of the director.
The scriptwriter is the person who work behind the scenes writing the script and dialog for the actors. The writer needs to work hard and brainstorm to write the dialog and interesting way of the story. Although working behind the scenes, it is not easy become a writer, they must be good in selecting the right word to make a good sentence.
Camera crew also need to working hard here, beside that they must be someone who good at take the angle. This part, needs so strong teamwork to make the film is easy to watch. They must work together to catch a good scene, from the lighting until the angle must be thought so full. Moreover, they must be good at editing and give some effect on the screen that make eye-catching.
Additional crew that also needed is makeup staff, eventhough it is just an additional very good to have it. Because if we have a group of crew that very professional on make up it is very help us to form the character of the actors. They can make over the actors. Makeup staff help to make the actors better looking on the screen or what the director want the actor looks like.
These are the crew on film-making that you have to know. If you want to make a movie just try to have all of them. Probably it can make your movie being success.
a. General statement : Film-making crew .
b. Thesis statement : There are many crew that is needed in making film.
II. Body
a. Thesis sentence : The chairman that so important is the producer.
- Supporting sentence : This person is fully responsible on the film-making.
- Supporting sentence : Producer finance the film-making.
- Supporting sentence : Producer pay a salary for the other crew .
b. Thesis sentence : The second is director, the leader of film-making process
- Supporting sentence : Become a director is not easy, it needs big responsible for their job to make the film become successful in the market.
- Supporting sentence : Direct the actors .
- Supporting sentence : Help to form character of the actors and also direct the setting of the film to make the film so catchy.
c. Thesis sentence : Other crew is the actors, mostly they are who have exceptional talent on acting and adoreable person who has interesting appearance.
- Supporting sentence : Actors must be good at expressing themselves in their role and explore the character.
- Supporting sentence : In addition, must be good at understanding the desire and direction of the director.
- Supporting sentence : Furthermore, mostly the actors have a good appearance.
d. Thesis sentence : The scriptwriter is the person who work behind the scenes writing the script and dialog for the actors.
- Supporting sentence : The writer needs to work hard and brainstorm to write the dialog and interesting way of the story.
- Supporting sentence : Although working behind the scenes, it is not easy become a writer, they must be good in selecting the right word to make a good sentence.
e. Thesis sentence : Camera crew also need to working hard here and they must be someone who good at take the angle.
- Supporting sentence : This part, need so strong teamwork to make the film is easy to watch.
- Supporting sentence : Moreover, they must be good at editing and give some effect on the screen that make eye-catching.
f. Thesis sentence : Additional crew that also needed is makeup staff
- Supporting sentence : Although makeup staff is just an additional crew, it is important to have.
- Supporting sentence : Makeup staff help to make the actors better looking on the screen or what the director want the actor looks like.
III. Conclusion
a. Thesis sentence : These are the crew on film making that you have to know.
Crew on Film
There are some people that can be categorized in film-making crew, they are producer, director, actors, writer, camera crew, and makeup staff. They should be exist on the film-making. From the leader until the person who works behind the scenes are very important. So, we really need to figure it out if we want to make a film.
The first is the chairman of the film, a producer. Producer is fully responsible in film-making if oneday there is problem. This is the person that finance film-making. On the order hand, this person also pay a salary for the crew. Producer is a powerful person here that can make decision the film should be produce or not.
The second important person is the director, the leader of the film-making process. Become a director is not easy, it needs a big responsible for their job to make the film become successful in the market. They must so good on predicting something the best for the film. Director is also must good at directing the actors to express their role. Furthermore, help to form character of the actors and decide the setting of the film to make the film so catchy are their work, too. It is need work hard you know.
Other crew is the actors, mostly they are who have exceptional talent on acting and adoreable person who has interesting appearance. Infact, most of the actors are famous person who good looking and have so many fans. It is the addtional mark to make the film success on the market. Moreover, the actors must be good at expressing themselves in their role and exploring the character. In addition, must be good at understanding the desire and direction of the director.
The scriptwriter is the person who work behind the scenes writing the script and dialog for the actors. The writer needs to work hard and brainstorm to write the dialog and interesting way of the story. Although working behind the scenes, it is not easy become a writer, they must be good in selecting the right word to make a good sentence.
Camera crew also need to working hard here, beside that they must be someone who good at take the angle. This part, needs so strong teamwork to make the film is easy to watch. They must work together to catch a good scene, from the lighting until the angle must be thought so full. Moreover, they must be good at editing and give some effect on the screen that make eye-catching.
Additional crew that also needed is makeup staff, eventhough it is just an additional very good to have it. Because if we have a group of crew that very professional on make up it is very help us to form the character of the actors. They can make over the actors. Makeup staff help to make the actors better looking on the screen or what the director want the actor looks like.
These are the crew on film-making that you have to know. If you want to make a movie just try to have all of them. Probably it can make your movie being success.
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